William
Shakespeare is commonly credited with having written 38 plays, many if not most
regarded as classics to this day. Why not make room for another?
The
answer is an easy no if the play is not up to the standard one expects from the
Bard of Avon. Much of the time this patriotism pageant unspools, the result is
uneven, as more sensitive members of academia put it. But then you find
yourself catching sparks of true genius and wit that, if not exclusive to
Shakespeare, ring with his singular voice.
Did
Shakespeare lend a hand? The evidence suggests a qualified yes.
The play opens at the dawning of the Hundred-Years’ War, an epic conflagration between England and France. The title character is being told by the French nobleman Artois that he, Edward, is the rightful king of France, “the lineal watchman of our peace” whom duty calls to claim his throne. After a French emissary arrives to haughtily demand Edward pay homage to France’s King John, Edward decides to visit the land across the Channel:
The play opens at the dawning of the Hundred-Years’ War, an epic conflagration between England and France. The title character is being told by the French nobleman Artois that he, Edward, is the rightful king of France, “the lineal watchman of our peace” whom duty calls to claim his throne. After a French emissary arrives to haughtily demand Edward pay homage to France’s King John, Edward decides to visit the land across the Channel:
Dare he command a fealty in me?
Tell him the Crown that he usurps is mine,
And where he sets his foot, he ought to kneel.
Tis not a petty Dukedom that I claim,
But all the whole Dominions of the Realm;
Which if with grudging he refuse to yield,
I'll take away those borrowed plumes of his,
And send him naked to the wilderness. [Scene i, lines 79-86]
Tell him the Crown that he usurps is mine,
And where he sets his foot, he ought to kneel.
Tis not a petty Dukedom that I claim,
But all the whole Dominions of the Realm;
Which if with grudging he refuse to yield,
I'll take away those borrowed plumes of his,
And send him naked to the wilderness. [Scene i, lines 79-86]
Following
through on that vow is pretty much the whole plot of Edward III, except
for a long adulterous interlude with a Scot-besieged noblewoman which is
believed by many to be Shakespeare’s major contribution to the play. The rest
concerns Edward’s easy conquest of France, an even-easier offstage conquest of
the Scots, and the glorious emergence in battle of his son, Prince Edward,
known to his father as Ned but fated to go down in history as the Black Prince.
The
Arden Shakespeare edition I read makes a strong case for judging Shakespeare at
least partially responsible for the officially uncredited Edward III.
Editors Richard Proudfoot and Nicola Bennett note commonalities in both
language and themes to known Shakespeare works from the early part of his
career, specifically Richard III (in both cases the royal title characters address the audience about their untoward objectives) and The Two Gentlemen Of Verona (where scheming Proteus, like adulterous Edward, undergoes a sudden change of heart.)
A
memorable phrase from Shakespeare’s then-unpublished Sonnet 94, “Lilies that
fester smell far worse than weeds,” appears in Scene ii of Edward III. Other
Shakespearean echoes also occur in the play.
Proudfoot
and Bennett posit the play was written initially by someone else, and later
revised by Shakespeare. Specifically Scenes ii and iii, involving Edward’s
attempted seduction of the Countess of Salisbury, are advanced as entirely
Shakespearean inventions, as the business of these two scenes, how Edward tries
unsuccessfully but persistently to pressure the married Countess for sex, is
scarcely referenced in the rest of the play, and rely upon different source
materials.
“On
the evidence, a revision of Edward III in 1593-4 was undertaken that
entailed the replacement and expansion…of a lost earlier version of the
Countess episode,” Proudfoot and Bennett explain. “It seems highly plausible
that the reviser was Shakespeare.”
Proudfoot
and Bennett also suggest Shakespeare’s hand in Scene xii, where young Ned the
Black Prince bravely sallies forth against the legions of France. “Death’s name is much more mighty than his deeds,”
he declares [xii, l.40]. Here the language as well as the action depicted soars
to the level of Shakespeare’s most up-tempo history play, Henry V:
AUDLEY
To die is all as common as to live:
The one in choice the other holds in chase;
For, from the instant we begin to live,
We do pursue and hunt the time to die:
First bud we, then we blow, and after seed,
Then, presently, we fall; and, as a shade
Follows the body, so we follow death.
If, then, we hunt for death, why do we fear it?
[xii, l.134-141]
I found Proudfoot and
Bennett’s claim convincing, even more so after reading Edward III for
myself. While I’m no Shakespeare scholar, merely a buff, I felt the Bard’s
presence in scenes ii and iii especially, and his absence just about everywhere
else.
Edward III is not a great play. It holds together alright,
but it reads like what it no doubt was at the time, a tubthumping exercise aimed
at British popular appeal in a period when the country’s most recent activities
involving France had not got nearly so well (they had been evicted from their
last French holding in Calais a generation before.)
The story itself is
fairly rudimentary; its execution perfunctory. Shakespeare’s role may have been
to pump up the drama on behalf of a specific production of the play. You see
the patches, anyway. Scenes ii and iii, involving Edward and the Countess, not
only exist in near-complete isolation to the rest of the play, but in terms of
length take up nearly a third of the play’s total lines. It makes for an odd
interlude of lust in a play concerned mostly with political will to power.
Ah, but perhaps there is
some thematic link. Proudfoot and Bennett note the idea of a king attempting to
enforce his rank to do wrong ties into the very Shakespearean notion of just
rule. This idea is enforced not only by Edward’s complete (if not entirely
convincing) change of heart in scene iii, but by other play elements as well.
Later, we see French
King John attempt to force his son Charles to violate a pledge of safe conduct
he has made to one of Edward III’s subjects. “What canst thou promise that I
cannot break?” [xiii, l.81] he demands. But Charles, in a rare moment of
humanity afforded to the play’s French characters, successfully convinces his
father otherwise.
Another
character best explains the moral limits of royal authority:
VILLIERS
In all things that uprightly he commands:
But either to persuade or threaten me,
Not to perform the covenant of my word,
Is lawless, and I need not to obey. [xi,
l.31-34]
This
idea is introduced in the Countess scenes. The Countess of Salisbury is
depicted as a loyal subject of Edward III, but her devotion is put to the test
when Edward takes a carnal interest in her. Here, the play becomes more subtle
as duty and honor become different concepts entirely; the Countess must find a
way to thread the needle. She ingenuously does this by suggesting first that
Edward agree to kill her husband and his wife, and, when Edward agrees, pulls
out a knife and offers to kill herself to protect both of them from committing
a grave sin.
KING EDWARD III
Thy opposition is beyond our Law.
COUNTESS OF SALISBURY
So is your desire: If the law
Can hinder you to execute the one,
Let it forbid you to attempt the other.
I cannot think you love me as you say,
Unless you do make good what you have sworn.
[iii, l.136-145]
And that settles
that. Edward sees past his lust, disavows his adulterous designs, and commits
himself to war against France: “Even by that power I swear, that gives me now/The power to be
ashamed of my self…” [iii, l.186-187]
Elsewhere,
the play is pretty rote. We get a bit of humor involving the vicious but
gormless Scots, who plot to ravish the Countess until Edward arrives to chase
them away. The Countess’s acid comments about the Scots’ “wild, uncivil, skipping gigs” and their indecipherable
brogues certainly amuse, and may have been the cause for the play to have been
left off Shakespeare’s First Folio. That was published in 1623, when England
was ruled by the Scotsman James I.
The extensive notes in
the Arden Shakespeare edition note incidences of mixed metaphor and of
repetition of sentiment that feel clumsy for one normally as focused and
economical as the Bard.
There are also odd passages like one where King Edward refuses to aid Ned, beset by a large number of foemen: “…we have more sons/Than one, to comfort our declining age.” [viii, l.23-24]
Even Henry VI, Part I, a play Shakespeare wrote with collaborators, and a very flawed one, offers more in the way of incident, including actual combat scenes and a shifting flow of fortune feeding a sense of earned victory. Edward III is entirely a talking-head production of seemingly preordained triumph, with the action only described taking place between or around scenes. The only suspense we get in it involves the virtue of the Countess.
But as an exploration of political power as it was seen in the late 1500s, most specifically in the Countess scenes, Edward III has something quite positive to say, and worth our attention. It’s not a great play, but as a candidate for Number 39 in the Shakespearean canonical list of plays, it has much to recommend it.
There are also odd passages like one where King Edward refuses to aid Ned, beset by a large number of foemen: “…we have more sons/Than one, to comfort our declining age.” [viii, l.23-24]
Even Henry VI, Part I, a play Shakespeare wrote with collaborators, and a very flawed one, offers more in the way of incident, including actual combat scenes and a shifting flow of fortune feeding a sense of earned victory. Edward III is entirely a talking-head production of seemingly preordained triumph, with the action only described taking place between or around scenes. The only suspense we get in it involves the virtue of the Countess.
But as an exploration of political power as it was seen in the late 1500s, most specifically in the Countess scenes, Edward III has something quite positive to say, and worth our attention. It’s not a great play, but as a candidate for Number 39 in the Shakespearean canonical list of plays, it has much to recommend it.
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