Sometimes childhood feels like a present that never quite got unwrapped. I had that feeling twice over with Hub.
Our title character is a pre-teen boy who lives in a river town in Arkansas. He seems the product of a loving, relatively successful family, but his life is centered around two other people.
One is Uncle Ethel, a wise old man who lives
on an isolated island, alone but for his aged dog and his shotgun. The other is a trouble-making
pal named Hitesy, who badgers Hub to do things he knows he shouldn’t, goading him with the magic word “chicken” whenever Hub hesitates. Hitesy
brags his father doesn’t care what he does, and dares Hub to follow his
example.
One
night Hitesy leads Hub into a seedy part of their town, a neighborhood called
Mink Slide where a local prostitute conducts business without drawing her
curtains. Hitesy and Hub see more than they bargained on, as the prostitute is
visited by a town lowlife named Lute Freeman. Lute is a hulking brute who just
walked out on the only job he is capable of doing, and when he can’t get
satisfaction in the form of a freebie, he kills the prostitute with an angry
swipe of his great hand. Then he spots the two boys watching through the
window, and gives chase. Eventually, the three find their ways to the old man's
island, where a long standoff ensues.
Did you ever have a book as a child or a teenager that you wanted to read, but never quite got around to? I guess there were a few of those for me; one of them was Hub. I was a freshman in high school when my father poked his head through my bedroom door and said he had this book he wanted me to read. It wasn’t even out in stores yet; what he had for me was a red-jacketed paperback known in the business as an “uncorrected proof.”
Did you ever have a book as a child or a teenager that you wanted to read, but never quite got around to? I guess there were a few of those for me; one of them was Hub. I was a freshman in high school when my father poked his head through my bedroom door and said he had this book he wanted me to read. It wasn’t even out in stores yet; what he had for me was a red-jacketed paperback known in the business as an “uncorrected proof.”
I
didn’t recognize the name on the jacket, one Robert Herring. For years, I
conflated the title with that of a Paul Newman movie, Hud, which I later saw and can report now Hub is nothing like. As to what Hub
was about, I could not say at the time, as I never read it. I don’t think I so
much as glanced at a page. But I often thought to myself, in quieter, deader
moments, that I should at least pick up the thing and give it a try. After all,
what would Dad say?
All
through the rest of my high-school years, as best I can remember, the book sat
on my bedroom desk, studiously ignored. Then came college, and my relocation. Hub seemed to vacate the premises by
that time, as if by its own sullen volition.
After
handing me the book, Dad never mentioned it to me again. Sometimes I thought there
was disappointment in his silence, at my blowing off something else in life he
wanted me to do. Maybe the book had some special meaning to him. Maybe “Robert
Herring,” since he was someone I never heard of, was someone Dad knew, writing
under a pseudonym. Maybe, it was even Dad himself, a writer who never made the hard
transition to fiction-writing though he loved novels and passed that love on to
me.
Of
course, it also occurred to me that the book was something he hadn’t thought
about himself much since handing it off to me.
Many
years later, long after Dad had passed on, I found the book in Mom’s attic,
distinctive in its plain red paperback jacket. It grabbed my attention like a
hand at my throat. Hub! The book Dad asked me to read which I never
did! How often had I wished I had done something to please the old man but waved
it off, thinking I’d always have the time… Well, you know how that song
goes.
I
apologize for the excess backstory, but it seems to have a bearing on my
takeaway from reading Hub. See, I really wanted to like Hub, for the fact it
was a kind of final gift from Dad, a gift deferred, but one he still left for
me, with a 35-year-old unanswered charge to read it. With that kind of
build-up, you want the result to be good, even at the cost of breaking your
heart.
So
it’s almost with a kind of nihilistic relief I can report that Hub was a book that didn’t grab me at
all. Not that it hasn’t got some fine ingredients. It’s a coming-of-age adventure
story with a pungent Southern feeling about it and a storyline with echoes of
the Jackson's Island idyll in The
Adventures Of Tom Sawyer, a book Dad knew I loved. If Dad ever did read it,
he might have seen a bit of me in the title character, a young boy with a
sheepish fear of life he needs to conquer.
But
the book doesn’t resonate with any kind of passion. It’s not especially
evocative regarding the experience of seeing the world through a boy’s eyes. As
an adventure story, it’s strangely static, mostly taking place on this island
where Hub and Hitesy decide to lay low after observing the murder, not
realizing Lute has somehow decided to hide out there, too.
Robert
Herring did actually exist. He taught English and poetry at Middle Tennessee
State University, living in Murfreesboro. The son of a preacher, Herring derived
much inspiration from the outdoors as Hub,
his debut novel, well attests. Herring published another novel, McCandless’s War, a few years later, and
passed away, either in 2004 or in 2011, Google searches being what they are. If
it was the earlier date, which I suspect, he outlived Dad by seven
years.
Herring
in the pages of Hub comes across as a
bit of a misplaced poet, focusing most of his attention on describing the
everyday wonders of the natural world at no small cost to character and plot.
“The sun was higher, probing down through the island’s willow crowns until the wood’s floor with its hennaed coverlet of bramble, burdock, Queen Anne’s lace, and bullbriers was pegged and tined with little chaplets of light,” Herring writes. That is a beautiful sentence, the kind I wish I had the vocabulary and sensitivity to write. Alas, he keeps writing like this during what is supposed to be a tense standoff near the novel’s end.
I need to point out here that the copy of Hub I am working from puts both me and Mr. Herring at a disadvantage. It’s that uncorrected-proof thing. People are asked not to base their reviews off of them, for good reason. What is on the pages of an uncorrected proof doesn’t always make it to what finally emerges in print.
It’s
possible that some editor, or Herring himself, might have reworked the text
somewhat, perhaps in the very direction I would have found worthwhile. I can
see in this book the seeds of some greatness, of exploring the darker corners
of one’s own under-regarded world and finding in oneself, with the help of a
wizened helper like Uncle Ethel, the strength to deal with those dark things in
a bold and meaningful way. The elements are here in the version of Hub in front of me; but they never come
together.
Instead,
the book kind of veers off into a lot of solitary rumination about the nature
of fear, and some plumbing of Uncle Ethel’s backstory that makes him out as a
kind of superhero, a strangely inert one yet self-reliant to a preternatural
degree. He’s very good at laying traps for the dangerous, persistent Lute,
though his major quality as Herring describes him is an unbecoming stillness
that grows more bothersome as the pages move toward a bloody climax.
The
characters are mono-dimensional to a fault. For all his awkward youth, that
sense I might suspect if he indeed ever read Hub that Dad saw in me, Hub’s principal characteristic is his
affection for Uncle Ethel. We see Uncle Ethel and Hub at the beginning of the
book talking about a “witchin’ pool” that draws those that look upon it to lose
their soul. Later, we learn how Uncle Ethel helped Hub rescue a crow he
accidently injured; as the bird took wing the boy seemed to think the bird
thanked him, an impression Uncle Ethel quietly encourages.
Mostly,
Uncle Ethel sets an example for Hub, one he doesn’t find anywhere else, certainly
not in Hitesy, who fast loses his authority over Hub as the danger of Lute presses
upon them, rendered by the novel’s second half to sniveling supercargo unable to appreciate the true bond of humanity that binds Hub to Uncle Ethel.
“Soon
or late a man’s got to do the closest he can to right,” Uncle Ethel explains.
But
this feels like a bit of strange advice, coming from where it does. Why Uncle
Ethel thinks it right to let Hub and his pal camp out on his yard without
telling them there’s a killer in the neighborhood until the loon practically
jumps in their bonfire doesn’t seem right to me. Uncle Ethel doesn’t even tell
a deputy about Lute’s lurking about the island even after Lute begins to
demonstrate his willingness to do harm. Maybe I just don’t have Uncle Ethel’s
aptitude for fixing traps.
For all his hulking menace, the villain, Lute Freeman, is the novel’s biggest misfire. A contemporary Kirkus Review of Hub calls him a “pea-brained lug,” which pretty much covers it. The fact Hub and Hitesy do nothing with their discovery of Lute’s murderous villainy frustrates this reader’s sympathies, but any moral complexity regarding this sin of omission is effectively squandered as Lute goes on to kill another person, this time making his complicity clear enough that he becomes a wanted man. After that, Lute doesn’t do much of anything interesting except lie in wait for an opening while Herring describes the world of nature around him, or else yell threats to show how evil he is.
For all his hulking menace, the villain, Lute Freeman, is the novel’s biggest misfire. A contemporary Kirkus Review of Hub calls him a “pea-brained lug,” which pretty much covers it. The fact Hub and Hitesy do nothing with their discovery of Lute’s murderous villainy frustrates this reader’s sympathies, but any moral complexity regarding this sin of omission is effectively squandered as Lute goes on to kill another person, this time making his complicity clear enough that he becomes a wanted man. After that, Lute doesn’t do much of anything interesting except lie in wait for an opening while Herring describes the world of nature around him, or else yell threats to show how evil he is.
There’s
a put-upon quality to the character, a sense Lute is acting so brutish, and
keeping after Uncle Ethel and the kids when he could be making tracks for safer
havens, simply because it fills a hole in the story for dramatic tension that
would otherwise be left gaping. I wasn’t sold on him at all. Again, there’s
more than an echo here of Tom Sawyer,
with Lute filling the Injun Joe role, but while Injun Joe makes for a memorable
villain, Lute never seems to have a thought in his head beyond murdering the
old man who keeps after him while he lurks.
The book offers a lived-in perspective about the natural world in particular, and Herring’s familiarity with Southern folkways and its various quirks is used to amiably amusing advantage. We get a couple of dry chuckles with a gas man who tolerates the ramblings of an old woman he hates because it’s his unhappy lot to do so.
The book offers a lived-in perspective about the natural world in particular, and Herring’s familiarity with Southern folkways and its various quirks is used to amiably amusing advantage. We get a couple of dry chuckles with a gas man who tolerates the ramblings of an old woman he hates because it’s his unhappy lot to do so.
“Ain’t
it wonderful to have a right-thinkin’, Christian president,” she muses, setting
the time of the novel to about the time of Jimmy Carter’s 1976 election. “I
jest feel our country is truly bein’ borned agin.”
But
we lose these characters fairly quickly in the narrative, not to mention
everyone else not named Hub, Hitesy, Lute, or Uncle Ethel. There’s some
business regarding the police investigation of Lute’s crimes, but to risk a bit
of a spoiler, they serve no useful purpose in the resolution of the plot. They
are just there to take up space, and allow Herring to make some comments about
backwards Southern folkways meaning little when faced up against the power of
true evil in the form of its stupider-than-dirt vessel, Lute Freeman.
There
is a fair bit of tension near the end of the book, as Lute becomes more violent
and desperate and the island becomes completely cut off from the mainland by a
rising river. It doesn’t pay off very well, but at least it moves some.
A reader with more of an interest in nature than me might find this a worthy
adventure story for what it presents, but I was too often bored and frustrated
by its failure to move more efficiently. I kept wondering how the 14-year-old
version of me would have taken to Hub,
or more likely, not taken to it, wishing all the time it would reach me in some
way that hearkened back to those old days with Dad. Perhaps there was some
solace in that disappointment. I wish it had been otherwise, though.
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